Emails… it’s time for a revolution!

Emails. Urggh, dontcha just love ‘em?

My particular favourite was the Sunday 9.35pm one from the boss. You know, the one setting out an entirely different approach to the event you had organised for the next day.

The problem is, thanks to email, you’re never really off-duty. Hands up, who’s checked their work emails while on a Spanish beach holiday or logged in after hours when you’re supposed to be switched off from work?

Unfortunately, emails aren’t going away anytime soon. But maybe, just maybe, we can make them a little less all-encompassing, a little more friendly and courteous, and even, perhaps, reduce the number we get every day.

As per my last email

Of course, we’ve all seen bad email examples chocked full of passive-aggressive work-induced tension.

Here’s a quick translation guide:

As per my last email – why haven’t you read my original email yet or completed the task it set out for you? I sent it this morning, for heaven’s sake!

I’m not sure you saw my last email – let’s face it, the sender knows you got it. It’s another little polite, not very polite, nudge.

Sorry for emailing you again – ah, the classic sorry, not sorry line.

As previously stated – it might as well be, “I’m writing this again because you are clearly ignoring me.”

I’m reattaching the document again – you haven’t opened it or remember anything about this topic, do you?

We still think of email as an instant two-way conversation, too, even though we have chat functions on Teams or WhatsApp and other work social channels for that now.

Perhaps it’s time for a revolution. A demand for emails to return to doing what the humble old fax used to do – sending essential documents rather than giving us 100-email-long conversation threads that are impossible to follow.

Even with the trusty old out-of-office response on, the emails keep flooding in. Makes that Monday morning back at work after your fortnight in the Dordogne such a delight, wading through what’s relevant to you and what’s not.

And what’s the CC function really all about? Is this an action for you, or has the sender just CCed in your boss to embarrass you?

Signing off right

What about signoffs?

Yours sincerely is a bit 1955.

Many thanks? What if they haven’t done anything yet?

Speak soon? Are we speaking soon? Should I consult my calendar?

Love ya. Aw, that’s nice, but perhaps not quite suitable for the workplace!

Kind regards, again, it’s not a letter from the 1950s.

An old colleague of mine always put an x at the end of his messages. I’ve adopted this practice, but not, as you might imagine, for more formal emails. Is that too much? Maybe I need to ask my colleagues and find out!

Email etiquette tips

Our Internal Comms Director Carly Murray put the email etiquette question to her LinkedIn followers, who thankfully shared some excellent tips. Here’s what we heard back.

  • Think… does what you’re sending need to be an email? Could it be a Teams message or a calendar reminder?
  • Use the To and CC boxes properly: @ the ‘To’ individuals on the elements directly linked to them to action/respond; clearly label who is CCed and why they need to be aware
  • In the subject line, clearly label whether it’s for action, for review, or awareness. If there is a specific deadline, put it in the subject (if close), higher up in the email or in bold
  • If you don’t need a response, flag this in the email
  • Keep it short and concise
  • Use bullet points to break text down
  • Use plain English (free checker hemingwayapp.com)
  • Avoid discussion conflict over email – pick up the phone for a conversation!
  • Be respectful of annual leave—if you can delay sending or keep a list instead, it can make returning to work much less painful!

Ant Fiorillo, Cultural Architect, Storyteller (and rather wonderfully), a Spreader of Smiles, said: “The point about avoiding discussion conflict is so valid! Nobody likes a keyboard warrior, and a phone call is always the quickest way to disarm them. I’d also add to avoiding unconscious passive aggressive openers and closers, too!

It’s a great point, Ant. Reading emails before sending them and removing anything that could be misconstrued as being a bit ‘aggy’ is a great place to start.

Sherry Fernandez, who improves employee experience through communication, shared her solutions: “Avoid BCCs, use bold keywords to highlight topics in an email, and keep it concise.”

We did some digging around, and we reckon the points below and the tips above will help us get out of email hell.

By the way, we’ve also seen stats that show that at least one-quarter of our work time is spent reading and writing emails. That’s a lot of time that could be freed up for more creative productivity!

  • Choose a clear and concise action-orientated subject line
  • Keep fonts simple with easy-to-read formatting
  • Keep an eye on punctuation. Capital letters are SHOUTY, and using too many exclamation marks can be misconstrued as being overexcited or even angry!!!! (see what we mean?)
  • Use appropriate signoffs and greetings – best regards and kind regards are for more formal use; a simple thanks or thanks in advance is a little friendlier.
  • Don’t overdo the humour – your recipient might not get the joke
  • Read your emails before sending them. Remember, they might be seen by other people
  • Keep the content short and concise
  • Do people really need to be CCed in?
  • and finally…

Decide whether you could talk to someone in person or over the phone instead of adding their groaning weight of emails.

We hope this helps, but of course, we can email this content to you if that’s easier!

Yours sincerely/many thanks/speak soon/love ya!

Listen up, people!  Listening can game-change your workplace culture.

Listen up, listen in, let me begin.

Here we go again, folks, yet more insight into the world of internal communications from song lyrics!

This time, it’s House of Pain (that’s not a French house made of bread by the way) who are providing the inspiration.

As delegates at our ninth Barn to Boardroom (the networking event for all IC pros) recently heard, listening up and listening in to their people (and getting leaders to do the same) as part of acknowledging peoples’ diverse voices can go a long way towards delivering a great working culture.

You can’t just nod along

But real listening one-to-one is not all that easy. It’s more involved than just nodding along. And how often have you made your feelings clear about something via a survey, only for it not to be even acknowledged by your organisation? Even if it was about the rise in yoghurt thefts from the staff kitchen, it would have been nice for someone to say, ‘we understand’, right?

As B2B 2024 delegates discovered, showing empathy and understanding while acknowledging your people’s views and acting on them is incredibly important to their morale, motivation and to your IC delivery success.

Thankfully, our brilliant B2B speakers were on hand to help our B2B’ers safely traverse the listening and leadership minefield…  so listen up!

Engaging with Viva Engage

As Amy Ellis, Head of Internal Communications at PHS Group, explained, having clear channels and offering your people every chance to talk and share how they are doing is a nailed-on way of demonstrating you care and you’re listening.

Of course, it’s not without its perils, and her leadership team was nervous about pressing ahead with her project to introduce Viva Engage into the business.

Listening to their worries and concerns and understanding their fears was crucial to getting their buy-in. One of their big fears was that they wouldn’t be interesting or have anything to say on the platform.

So, Amy and her team listened. She created a safe space, demoed Viva Engage with them, and explained how it would fit in at PHS.

She listened to PHS people and had data she could use to convince the leadership team that it was what people wanted and needed. She listened in to them 121, helping them overcome individual fears and embarrassments.

It led to her mantra for them on Viva Engage: ‘Be Interested, Not Interesting’. It’s helped shape the leaders’ content, and they are now more visible and in the moment. They’ve opened up, shown real emotion, and shared authentic stories.

How she approached the leaders helped them listen to her, and taking time to understand where they were was transformational for them and the business.

A little league table showing which leadership team member has the most monthly engagement hasn’t hurt in driving some competitiveness, either!

Employee activism

Your people will always have differing views and opposite points of view, and some will be very vocal about how they feel.

 It’s especially true these days when there are so many conflicts and suffering worldwide. Black Lives Matter, Roe v Wade, Gaza, Ukraine. Perhaps your organisation could be doing more for the environment. Your people will have a viewpoint on all of these and more.

So, as Sarah Meurer, B2B Co-Founder and VP of Global Internal Communications at Elsevier, said, you’ll need to demonstrate that you’re listening and understanding while considering how much influence your organisation could or should exert on an issue.

Pretending it ain’t happening isn’t going to cut it, and Sarah suggested working with your leadership team to form a response (if relevant) was a good place to start.

Defining your organisation’s authority on a subject, whether it’s your concern, and how much change you should or could make to the agenda are helpful questions to answer when defining an internal (and external) response to a hot topic.

Whatever happens, Sarah stressed the number one priority should always be ensuring your people feel safe and psychologically protected in an inclusive environment.

Some key ways to deliver it are to create FAQs, be empathetic, offer support and education on a hot topic, and ensure internal social media is managed and monitored.

Where are you on the listening spectrum?

Successful organisations use customer insights and innovation, accept change, do the right thing… and, crucially, listen to their people.

Howard Krais and Mike Pounsford, Co-Authors of Leading The Listening Organisation, told our B2B delegates that workplaces are now entering an ‘age of listening’ where listening is paramount to business success.

To build a deep listening organisation, we need to hear and respond appropriately to our people and ensure that leaders have the right mindset and approach to do this across individual listening styles.

They said businesses can’t innovate without listening, especially to teams close to customers.

Ultimately, organisations need to listen to their people because it’s the right thing to do.

They shared their listening spectrum, which ranges from passive, more reactive, and BAU stages of being a listening organisation to deeper, more engaging, and co-creating organisations and everything in between.

HR and IC – they can work together by listening!

They may have similar goals, often the same values, and the same desire to ensure people can thrive in the workplace. So, why don’t HR and IC always seem to get along?!

Kathryn Kendall, partner and chief people officer at Saltus, told B2B delegates that listening across the departments can help bring people together.

It’s about talking and understanding how HR and IC can help each other. Make the ‘why’ and the ‘because’ of what you’re doing clear, and spend time understanding each other’s goals.

She said investing in listening, genuinely hearing your people, acting on it and ensuring that approach starts from the top is essential to becoming a listening organisation.

It needs to be nurtured. After all, a good workplace culture can’t be taken for granted!

So, there we have it – another B2B done and dusted. Judging by the feedback so far, it was definitely more House of Fun than House of Pain!

In fact, it was so good we’re doing it again next year.

To register for B2B 2025 and enjoy great IC insight (plus a smashing BBQ, free gin and more), go to https://ineedsurgery.com/register-for-tickets/

See you there!

Right, why writing right is right for writing right internal comms… right?

What, why, where, who, and when are just five little words, helpfully, all starting with a w, so they are easy to remember. 

The next time that horrifically blank Word document stares back at you, willing you to create an award-winning piece of internal comms content, but you’ve got nothing in the tank, start by answering your five Ws. What do I need to get across? Why are we doing it? Where is it happening? To who and when

It’s a good place to start. 

Of course, there are some nuances and other bits and pieces to consider when writing for an internal communications audience. But keeping those five little words in your mind and sketching out rough answers to each question should give you a nice basis from which to start your story, email, or that passive-aggressive note asking people not to nick your yoghurt from the shared work fridge. 

Of course, as the Fun Boy Three and Bananarama so wisely once sang, it’s not what you do; it’s the way that you do it. (I did promise never to mention them again in a previous blog, but here we are—sorry!) 

What the 80s pop funsters were obviously trying to say is that while what you say is important, it’s the way that you get it across that will keep everyone on tenterhooks eagerly awaiting your next beautifully composed piece of content. 

Answering those five little questions is the bones of your story, your email (or that passive-aggressive note we spoke about earlier), and it’s a useful mantra to stick to.  

Let’s get to the point already 

If you like a bit of overly flowery prose good for you, but don’t forget to get to the point. It’s a crying shame, but people will scan and read what you put in front of them. In fact, you’re scanning this now I bet. 

All those hours wrestling with your thesaurus (why isn’t there another name for thesaurus?) are to nought if you don’t get to the bleeding point up top.  

That’s why I started with the five ‘Ws’ in the first two paragraphs, that was the point I wanted you to remember. Of course, you may have dropped off to sleep by this paragraph, in which case you won’t be reading this bit anyway. 

KISS! Thought that might wake you up. KISS, of course, stands for keep it simple, silly. That last S actually stands for stupid, but not being overly rude to your readers is another good takeaway to remember. 

So, be less Dostoevsky and more Post-it note. Clarity of message is king. Keeping things simple and ensuring clarity of your message is king, and the king of your writing is clarity of message (a little bit of repeating your core message will help get it across, too, hopefully you saw what I did there). 

Let’s utilise your leverage and deal with the shark 

Write how you talk. Who in real life says utilise instead of use? Have you ever heard anyone say’ leverage’ in any conversation you’ve had throughout your life? What does leverage even mean? 

It’s not big or clever to use long words. Or to tie lead weights to your writing with silly business speak that people will either laugh at or roll their eyes at. 

One old boss of mine, when we were faced with putting out some crisis communications, said we should ‘deal with the shark closest to the boat’. I remember what they were saying, I guess, but it was difficult to take anything else they said seriously after that! 

Slay that dragon

KISS doesn’t mean what we say has to be boring. If you’ve got a bit of space to delve into a topic a bit more, then a bit of storytelling does wonders. People like to hear about other people. If you’ve had a brilliant fiscal year, maybe focus on the people who delivered it, why they did what they did, and what barriers they overcame. We want to know how and why they had to slay that financial dragon rather than getting bogged down in numbers.  

People stories stimulate the soul and spark neurons. Adopting a more human approach means your communications can ring out across the corporate wilderness like a lonely wolf baying for the attention of its pack or a bellowed yodel across a pristine alpine valley. Sorry, got carried away there for a minute, should have kept it simple! 

The point is that a human-inspired story is more likely to be remembered by your people and talked about and shared. 

It’s what AI can’t do yet, it can’t be you. All those AI bots scrabbling across the internet for content helping you prepare that last-minute presentation to your boss can’t compete against your experience, your emotions, and your human responses. 

Reject AI and bring a bit of yourself into your writing. This will keep it honest, genuine, and, importantly, relatable to your audience.  

Rejecting AI will also keep copywriters like me in a job, of course (ahem). 

So, remember your five WSs and KISS. 

Oh, and let’s be more human… hah! Take that AI! 

Remember, we’re here to help with copywriting, storytelling, design, digital strategy, internal communications, EVP, and more! 

Good design is invisible

The thing about good design is you don’t often know it’s good design. Because it just works. 

Don’t get me wrong, design will give us those ‘wow’ moments and totally blow our minds. But 99% of design is totally unsung. It’s so good you don’t even notice it.

That’s not to say it’s easy, mind. It doesn’t just happen by accident. In fact, it’s actually an exercise in user experience. Let me explain.

Designing for the user

Someone once said, ‘the most important story you tell is the one in the mind of the reader’. The quote was actually about copywriting (I can remember that much, just not who said it!). Anyway, you could say something similar about design.

The important aspect of design is how it’s interpreted by the viewer. Therefore, everything is approached with that in mind:

  • What draws you in?
  • Where do you look first?
  • What happens next?
  • How do you get to what you need?

It’s how the mind works…

Have you heard of Gestalt theory? It’s a branch of psychology which says whilst the world is made up of lots of small parts, we process things as a whole. 

So, when you look at a car, you see a vehicle, not a collection of wheels, lights, windows and sheet metal. When you look at spaghetti bolognese (my favourite), you see a meal, not a mound of beef (or, in my case, plant) bits, mushrooms, tomatoes ,and  pasta.

Think of how complex the world would be if we processed everything there is to see. We have to make shortcuts. We do that by grouping things and seeing them as a whole. 

If we didn’t, by the time we processed the sharp claws, big teeth, narrow eyes, etc, the angry bear would have made its own spaghetti bolognese…  out of us.

Gestalt psychology is the foundation of good design.

The key principles

If we’re going to create visual things for people to process, knowing how they process them gives us a great advantage. 

There are various principles at the heart of Gestalt psychology. Here are some of the key ones:

  • Proximity – we make associations between objects based on their location. Where an object sits between two pieces of content, we assume it to belong to the one closest. 
  • Closure – we fill gaps between elements to create a whole image, even when there is not one. Dashes may form a circle, dots may create a square. We just need a suggestion of an image and our minds will do the rest.
  • Continuity – we see things as related when they sit in line. We naturally follow a linear path and connect those things that sit along it. 
  • Figure/ground – we separate what we see as the focal point from what we see as background. Contrast often helps us identify the light on dark or vice versa, but colours and imagery mean it’s not always that simple.   
  • Similarity – we naturally group items together based on colour, size, and orientation. Objects with similar appearance are thought to have the same characteristics (all words highlighted in red must mean X).

With all of these in mind, a good designer can use spacing, contrast, hierarchy and everything at their disposal to create pleasing visuals that just work.

It’s an experience for the user, built around how their mind works.

The unsung heroes

So, each time you look at a brochure, land on a website or see an advert, and just naturally know where to focus, what to attend to and what to take away, – spare a thought for the designer.

They have built visuals to play into how you see the world. 

They’re the ones who have worked hard, so ultimately, you don’t have to!

Get in touch if you need help visualising your story (we’ve also got a great Bolognese recipe too!)

Employer branding: should you hide the crap?

Let’s be honest; no business is perfect. Yeah, some are pretty good. But we all get things wrong. And we all have areas to improve. Still, when it comes to employer branding, let’s shout about the good stuff and put the rest in a drawer. Right?

Let’s leave that question hanging for a moment and go right back to the start. 

Why do we invest in employer branding? To help us attract better talent? To reduce recruitment costs? To engage existing employees?

Well, everyone will have slightly different objectives, but the crux tends to be attraction, with maybe a little retention. So, it would seem counterproductive to focus on anything other than the actual selling points of the business, wouldn’t it?

Well, our research suggests that when people are looking into a potential employer, the top two things they are looking for are 1) cultural alignment and 2) signs of their reputation.

What’s more, when it comes to choosing a job, we found that employer reputation is the second most influential thing for Generation Z (after culture) and the fourth most influential for everyone else (after work/life balance, salary and benefits, and culture).

People used words like “credibility” and “red flags” when describing what they’re seeking out in a potential new employer.

The reality is job seekers are looking at the good stuff but also digging deeper for reasons not to join.

Trust and believability

It seems safe to assume people’s behaviour is driven by a need for trust. When you read employer claims, you want to make sure they are as real as they say they are and you’re not about to waste time and energy.

So, let’s consider two hypothetical employer brands.

  • Business #1

You land on their career site. They’ve captured all the shiny great stuff that makes them look like a great workplace, with some nice personal employee content to bring it to life. Great.

You’re excited, but you do your due diligence. You look at Glassdoor and feel immediate disappointment that the reviews don’t match the company content.

So, you search for news articles about their culture and find they’ve made some bad decisions in the past. Hmmm.

  • Business #2

The business has captured all the great stuff, as before. But as you scroll through their content, these guys also make some admissions.

They made mistakes in the past, but it’s made them stronger and wiser as a result. They offer many great things, but they’re still working to improve X, Y and Z – and they invite you to be part of that journey.

Maybe they even give a narrative on their employer reviews and recent press, giving a humble understanding of their strengths and weaknesses and demonstrating the action taken as a result.

Which business do you choose?

Who fosters the most trust and belief?

A product versus a relationship

The thing is, when you look at how we market and sell products, we wouldn’t dream of highlighting the things they don’t offer people. Just picture it – “The latest iPhone has the world’s best camera but at the expense of the quality of the speaker”.

It just wouldn’t happen.

But with these products, we’re looking for volume. We want to sell to everyone.

What we’re looking to achieve in employer branding is more akin to building a long-term relationship. So more like eharmony than Amazon.

It’s about developing trust and understanding and taking the steps towards a commitment together.

Spotify admits that the way they work can be chaotic. Netflix openly says they aren’t a good match for people looking for stability or building seniority. Openness breeds believability but also increases the likelihood of finding the right person.

If something sounds like it’s amazing in every possible way, do you just think, “Wow, I’ve hit the jackpot”, or do you think “, Hang on, this sounds too good to be true”? Let’s be honest; an endless list of positives isn’t fooling anyone.

Put yourself in their shoes

It’s hard to distance yourself from the love you have for your company, your role or even your service. It’s what makes you a passionate professional.

But sometimes, the real value comes when you step back from your view of things and see it from your candidate’s perspective. Building your brand based on their behaviour and needs will bring you the most success.

So, should you hide the crap? No, you shouldn’t.

You don’t have to shine huge great lights on it, but the more balance you present, the more believable you’ll feel, and, well, the more you’ll lay down the first steps of a good relationship with the right match.

Want to know more about candidate views? Check out our research here.

Want to learn more about the Surgery and see how we’re people people? See our team here.

How do you convince a candidate to join you?

How do you get that perfect candidate to take that leap of faith? What would clinch it? And what does that tell us about how we’re really doing?

It’s a golden question. What’s the one thing we could do to convince you to join us?

For me, it’d be – show me how what I’m doing is positively helping people and positively helping the planet. And whilst I’m there, pay for some solar panels for my roof and perhaps a month’s travelling for my wife and me. Oh, and dog care whilst we’re there.

Okay, maybe I need to think that through a little more, but you get the gist.

We asked this question to over 100 people as part of a small research project. And do you know what they said? Certainly not this:

  • Make me MD
  • Buy me a boat
  • Give me shares
  • Double my salary

There were no outrageous requests. Not one.

We were shocked and disappointed. But actually pleasantly surprised! And maybe even a little moved. Genuinely, the nature of most replies was quite humbling.

What do people want? 

What is that one thing, then? What is the one thing that convinces you to join a company?

Yes, there were some of the things you might assume. There were people looking for financial reward, but more in a more measured way than you might think:

  • “More money and better working environment”
  • “Right now, it would probably be a significant salary increase.”
  • “Pay me fairly for my experience and what I bring to the table.”

It was far from the main theme.

You might also assume some requests around flexibility. And you would be right:

  • “Improve work/life balance”
  • “Show me how I can still put home life first.”
  • “four-day week“
  • “Remote work 100%”

But the absolute joy was in the consistent responses around fairness and ethics. People value being treated with respect, living up to values, honesty, and many other humble traits.

Now, we’re not expecting that to be a mind-blowing surprise – people are people. But remember, this is the ONE THING an employer could do. This is your big ask.

Here are ten responses to convey our point:

  1. “To be fair and transparent in all areas of the business.”
  2. Remove badly behaved employees to live by values.”
  3. “Demonstrate  they are fair, kind and ambitious.”
  4. “Show me how they value their staff.”
  5. Demonstrate that they put their values at the heart of how they lead and make decisions.”
  6. “Be honest about its failings.”
  7. “Show their track record to match their promises.”
  8. Respect my views and opinions.”
  9. “Convince me they give off a good energy and that they’re positive about what they do.”
  10. “Have an amazingly driven, kind team.”

And so…

And so, the question is – what do we take from this?

It’s great that people have such humble requests. Treat me fairly. Value my opinions. But it suggests these basic things are currently absent. If that’s the ONE THING you want, then the likelihood is that you don’t have it right now. Is that an assumption? Yes, but it feels like a very logical one.

So, whilst there’s a nice view of humanity from the responses we received, there’s maybe a tainted view of employers.

Are we all getting the basics wrong? 

Are we failing to make people feel they’re appreciated for the value they bring? Are we failing to be honest about our mistakes? Are we failing to show people we care about their opinions?

Here at The Surgery, we’ve always said to have the best employer brand you just need to be the best employer. And I think this underlines our view.

So, before we get excited about the snazzy things we can do to attract new people, let’s get the fundamentals right. For us, that starts with listening. Let’s ask people how we’re doing and build a plan that turns their thoughts into positive action.

Once that’s sorted, I’ll get back to negotiating that month-long trip and those solar panels 😉

Want to hear more about that research study? Download the report here.

The big Employer Branding question: Are you worthy?

Understand the context, case and considerations for a modern employer brand

We all want to attract and retain the best people. It’s expensive, it’s time consuming and it’s an endless cycle.

Employer branding is a way of working smarter. It’s a way of showcasing your story, spreading the good word, and getting people to choose you as the place they want to work.

We’ve pulled together external research, example brands and our own learnings to give you a step up. Gather all the insights you need for your business case and get a head start on your employer branding strategy with our guide.

Download your copy of our whitepaper: The Big Employer Branding Question